Full Manuscript Critique

A manuscript critique is a big-picture level of editing. It does not analyze grammar, punctuation, or word usage. Instead it looks at aspects of the novel including (but not limited to) voice, pacing, word choice, character development, point of view, scene vs. summary, etc.

While a manuscript critique (also called a manuscript evaluation) is similar to a developmental edit, it is not nearly as exhaustive. Comments are not included at every instance of a trouble spot to be worked out—as they are in a developmental edit

This service might be right for you if:

  • You have a complete (or mostly complete) manuscript

  • You are looking for guidance on how to strengthen the writing

  • You are open to suggestions for structural or content changes that could lead to major revisions

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Alyson—MG Sci-fi/Fantasy Author

“Tiffiny's perspective brought a fresh look at my work, and in many instances, helped me strengthen it. She is a skilled collaborator, was willing to hear my concerns, consider the idiosyncrasies of my story world, explain when she thought it worked and when it didn't, and why. Her suggestions were clear and provided a map that continues to help me navigate the entire series.”

Renata—Picture Book Writer

“Tiffiny’s feedback on my picture book manuscript gave me renewed hope for my manuscript. I learned so much about what I could do to strengthen my story and make it more appealing to my target audience.”

What’s included:

  • A complete read of the manuscript to analyze literary features such as plot, character arc, point of view, etc.

  • In-line comments sprinkled throughout the manuscript to point out examples of areas that could be strengthened.

  • A multi-page editorial letter summarizing the literary analysis with suggestions for revisions.

  • Follow-up communication to discuss suggestions via email and/or zoom

What’s NOT included:

  • copyediting

  • proofreading

  • book map

Your investment:

  • starting at $0.02 per word

  • Under 10,000 words

    Starts at $100

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