Developmental

Edit

A developmental edit (sometimes called a substantive edit) is a big-picture level of editing. It does not analyze grammar, punctuation, or word usage. Instead it looks at aspects of the novel including (but not limited to) voice, pacing, word choice, character development, point of view, scene vs. summary, plot consistency, etc.

A developmental edit differs from a manuscript critique in that it offers extensive in-line comments throughout the entire manuscript. Each problematic spot in the manuscript will be flagged and suggestions will be made for revision.

Writers who put their stories through a developmental edit will come away with a thorough and clear plan for revisions.

This service might be right for you if:

  • You have a complete (or mostly complete) manuscript

  • You are looking for guidance on how to strengthen the writing

  • You are open to suggestions for structural or content changes that could lead to major revisions

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Gari—YA Contemporary Christian Author

“I was blown away by the results of Tiffiny’s developmental edit. It revealed so many things we weren’t aware of. Her feedback elevated our manuscript to a professional level.”

Michelle—YA Romantasy Author

“I knew something wasn’t working with my storyline, but I couldn’t see exactly what it was nor how to fix it. Tiffiny’s developmental edit made the problems crystal clear and her plan for revisions got me unstuck. After years of working on this manuscript, it is finally moving forward.”

What’s included:

  • Two complete reads of the manuscript to analyze literary features such as plot, character arc, point of view, pacing, timeline consistency, etc.

  • In-line comments throughout the manuscript to point out problematic areas.

  • A multi-page editorial letter discussing the literary analysis as well as a plan for revision.

  • Bookmap (spreadsheet analyzing the chapters)

  • Follow-up communication to discuss suggestions via email and/or zoom

What’s NOT included:

  • copyediting

  • proofreading

Your investment:

  • starting at $0.03 per word

  • $500

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